Here ya go...

2000 Dodge Ram 1500 4X4 - $4300

For sale is my 2000 Dodge Ram 1500 4x4
162,000 miles
5.9L V8 w/ automatic transmission
Truck has an exhaust leak, otherwise no major problems.
Interior is in excellent condition. Body has some rust, nothing major.
The truck has a few performance and cosmetic mods including intake, exhaust, tuner,
cowl hood, and a lot more.

If you're interested call/text for more info @ 555-555-5five5five
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And like Oxy said, take way better pictures. Front, both sides, back, interior, under hood. That's it.

ps it's rollER rockers not rollor...

 

i agree with reducing the number of words in the ad, more along with Matt's above, but throw in -
New inspection sticker.
New brakes.
New tires.

and eliminate the front picture with the skull face.
it's a nice looking truck. if you can afford to wait, you might get more for it as winter gets closer.

 

thamkls for your guys imput means alot here i redid the ad, let me know of anything else . i removed all the viper cowl hood pics as i took it off selling seprate . and waiting for stock rockers of ebay to sell my harland sharps . dont wanna bother with the airgap and headers and fastman can stay on. http://pittsburgh.craigslist.org/cto/4089414509.html

 

my hood http://pittsburgh.craigslist.org/pts/4047594550.html

 

http://pittsburgh.craigslist.org/ele/4084245330.html my sub

 

Oh man...lost cause. You said you went to school in your first ad...did you happen to skip English class?

 

^^ Seriously. Fix your ads, all of them. Put a little bit of effort into it.

 

your ad is still terrible.

take off the truck nuts and the picture of them.
remove the stickers from the back window.
remove anything else that your mother wouldn't want on her car.

take off the pictures from the car show.
take off the picture crossing the creek.
if fact - remove all the pictures and start over.
take a picture from eye level of each angle. front, rear, each side, and each of the 4 corners. take a close up of each flaw - rust, dent, whatever. and then don't mention it in the ad but do answer questions when asked.

write the ad exactly like this:

2000 Dodge Ram 1500 4X4 - $5000

5.9L V8 w/ automatic transmission.
162,000 miles.
Truck is well maintained and in excellent condition.
New inspection sticker. New tires. New brakes.
4 wheel drive works and is ready for winter.

Call or text xxx-xxx-xxxx.